DONT BE A COSMO GIRL
“Do you follow
fashion?” or “Are you interested in fashion?” are the questions that are asked
us frequently. Even if some people say they aren’t, I think everybody sometimes
has to follow it. Firstly, when something is in fashion, there are some colors
and styles in big shopping centers, local shops or outlet centers. So even if
we don’t like fashion we have to follow it by this way.
However, there are some people who make fashion the
most important part of their life. Whenever something is new in fashion, that
kind of people are always ready to try! Sometimes it may even become illness
for them to look fashionable. So it harms them both economical and
psychological. I think, fashion isn’t something that we have to live according
to it. If we find things god for ourselves, then it is worth trying. However
having clothes just because they are in fashion isn’t a logical act. Every
person is radically different from each other in respect of their character,
life style and interests. When they have some outfits as they are in fashion,
there is no difference to take them apart. It shouldn’t be forgotten that our
appearance and life style give people strong clues.
All in all, fashion affects our life in different
ways. Being interested in fashion may be incentivebut we shouldn’t put it in
the center of our life. What I mean is that we shouldn’t buy something just
because it is in fashion.
I
chose this song as it reflects what I mean. As you see in the video fashion is
such an important part of their life for people that they mention it in a
song's lyrics. I think fashion means everything for some people as they
emphasises in the song. “Cause fashion’s what we breathe.”
In
my opinion, fashion is exaggerated by people which is wrong.
Dear Hale, You are totally right about fashion craziness. I like your journal. You organized your journal well and your examples are relevant. However, there are some trivial mistakes such as,starting a sentence with so, aren't, shouldn't but it doesnt matter.Thanks to you:)
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