I commented on 2 friends' journals and 2 friends' reflections.

http://serifbaltaci.blogspot.com/2012/10/what-ideal-university-for-me-is-metu.html?showComment=1358713277116#c4407136338455284225

http://zeynepeda.blogspot.com/2012/12/reflective-journal-2-pianist.html

http://tbcan.blogspot.com/2013/01/journal-8video-reflection-4.html

http://elifaydn.blogspot.com/2012/10/i-change-with-metu.html

                                             ERROR CORRECTION


1) When I first heard that I had been accepted to Middle East Technical University, I was disappointed because I do not like Ankara as a city. However, my opinion has dramatically changed over time as Middle East Technical University is really a different world in Ankara.

2) It has been only a month since I came here. However, I got used to this environment because people at all ages respect each other here.

3) I love Ankara, my dormitory, my new friends and my department. I am content with everything which belongs to METU.

4)  If someone wants to walk, he or she can wander around and it is a nice place to meet friends.

5) We can easily see this by watching TV, surfing on the internet or just looking around us. There are many people who graduated from different kinds of universities but they are not even able to know what is going on around the or they do not even try to find good ways to improve the countries where they live.

               JOURNAL ENTRY 2 REVISED VERSION

     METU is like another lovely city in Ankara with its beautiful campus. Being a part of this feels so good as I have always dreamed about it.

  In METU we have lots of facilities to improve ourselves, to socialize or to specialize in our fields. In other words, it gives countless opportunities to make us more sophisticated and easy-going. A great many examples can be given for it. Firstly, we have a huge and well-equipped library which provides a lot of materials and access to all kinds of information. Secondly, campus supplies almost everything that anybody needs. It is a rare feature that few universities have. Lastly, there are many kinds of clubs here and they enable us to meet other people, make new friends and be a part of something. Anyone can find at least one club that appeals to him. When we think about intellectual advantages of being a METU student, we can say that “English as a language of education” is a big opportunity. In this way students will be one step ahead in their field when trying to make a career. Besides all these good features there are hardships too. Courses are so hard and it is the biggest challenge for me as I have to study hard every time. However, when I think my future career this challenge becomes less important to me.

   Overall, being a METU student is a great thing and every single day I spend here will be an unforgettable experience. It means more than a university for me.

                     

                 JOURNAL ENTRY 3 REVISED VERSION

       University is such an important part of our lives that we have always dream about it since high-school’s first years. Everyone has different images in their minds when they think about their ideal university. I can count some specific characteristics of my ideal university.

     First of all, campus should be big and full of green area since such a nice place always makes me peaceful. People that are living in this campus are also an important factor for me. I want them to be open-minded, cheerful and friendly. In this way they can express themselves freely. Moreover, my ideal university has all the necessary materials and facilities for my profession. It helps me to improve myself on every hand. It creates me a free environment to make my dreams come true. Apart from these, it has lots of social activities and clubs. Thus, students find opportunity to socialize and get away from the stress of the courses. Lastly, it provides accommodation for all students so that no one faces any troubles to find a place to stay.

     When I this compare METU with my ideal university I can say that it fits almost all my criteria as it is one of the best universities in terms of academic and social life. It offers everything that a student will need.

VIDEO REFLECTION 3

                                                               

                                              

                                                 THE MISSING

    Casta-Gavras (the director of the film) tried to stay away from political polemic and exhibited an attitude like a dramatic document in this film. It took place North America where military stroke affected life severely. When preparing this film, the director combined with the book by Thomas Hauser and the even which is about Charles Harman that was killed in Chile during a military stroke.

      Even though it took place in Chile, at first it started in Santiago whose regions were full of soldiers, frightened children faces, fires and at the same time people drinking their champagne.

  Beth (Sissy Spacek) started some researches to find her lost journalist husband Charles Harman. Even Ambassadorship couldn’t help her. Later, Charles Harman’s patriot and conservative father Ed Harman joined the research. But the clues they had made him think that his son was killed because of some political reasons.

     After the period that waking up after a long and deep “sleep” the action of the film increased reasonably. “The Missing” reminds people the pain they had and affects them like being slapped.

    I really liked the story of the film as it was interesting for me. Also, actors’ performances were praiseworthy. The message given in the film about America was notably effective. Actually, I don’t like politic or political films but this film attracted my attention. So I watched it without being bored. As you see in the trailer it is an old movie but don’t be prejudice because of it. I am sure you will like it.

VIDEO REFLECTION 2

                          

                            BEST WAY TO COMMUNICATE

 

       Because of development of technology face-to-face communication lost its value. As technological devices provide constant communication for people, they tend to use them more often. However, they don’t realize the fact that it isn’t the same thing as seeing each other in flesh. Communication is a need for people in their life. They express themselves, share their feelings and make new friends by communicating with one another. It is the best when communication is face-to-face. If you see someone’s face and his facial expression while talking, you can better understand him. On the other hand, when you chat with your friend on net you can’t be sure if he tells the true. Moreover, touching is also a way to communicate and it makes communication more effective. It is only possible when you talk someone face-to-face.  Lastly, when we miss our relatives, friends we don’t only want to talk them but also want to see and hug them. The only way to do is face-to-face communication.

     To sum up, face-to-face communication is the best way to express ourselves and understand others when compared to letters, telephone etc. Also, it is the only way to  have a real and healthy relationship with others.

  This video indicates ideally what I mention in my paragraph. As it is seen in the video face-to-face communication isn’t a new thing. On the contrary it is the oldest way to communicate but it isn’t in demand anymore. Unfortunately, technological devices have already taken the place of face-to-face communication. However, there isn’t any device more effective than face-to-face communication. People should be aware of this fact and they should give due importance to face-to-face communication.

VIDEO REFLECTION 1

                                                    DONT BE A COSMO GIRL

      “Do you follow fashion?” or “Are you interested in fashion?” are the questions that are asked us frequently. Even if some people say they aren’t, I think everybody sometimes has to follow it. Firstly, when something is in fashion, there are some colors and styles in big shopping centers, local shops or outlet centers. So even if we don’t like fashion we have to follow it by this way.

However, there are some people who make fashion the most important part of their life. Whenever something is new in fashion, that kind of people are always ready to try! Sometimes it may even become illness for them to look fashionable. So it harms them both economical and psychological. I think, fashion isn’t something that we have to live according to it. If we find things god for ourselves, then it is worth trying. However having clothes just because they are in fashion isn’t a logical act. Every person is radically different from each other in respect of their character, life style and interests. When they have some outfits as they are in fashion, there is no difference to take them apart. It shouldn’t be forgotten that our appearance and life style give people strong clues.

      All in all, fashion affects our life in different ways. Being interested in fashion may be incentivebut we shouldn’t put it in the center of our life. What I mean is that we shouldn’t buy something just because it is in fashion.

 I chose this song as it reflects what I mean. As you see in the video fashion is such an important part of their life for people that they mention it in a song's lyrics. I think fashion means everything for some people as they emphasises in the song. “Cause fashion’s what we breathe.”  

 In my opinion, fashion is exaggerated by people which is wrong.